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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Three months ago, April thirteenth was election day of National Assembly.
Voter turnout was almost over fifty percent.
Owing to problems of the ruling party’s nomination, the ruling party was substituted the opposition party.
Many people critize politicians and their promises and don’t vote the election.
To change our society, politicians’duty or role is very important, but they are just fighting to keeo their interests no thinking about their citizens.
The end of next year will be a presidential election.
I hope that first-of-all truly people and competent president will elected.
Voter turnout was almost over fifty percent.
Owing to problems of the ruling party’s nomination, the ruling party was substituted the opposition party.
Many people critize politicians and their promises and don’t vote the election.
To change our society, politicians’duty or role is very important, but they are just fighting to keeo their interests no thinking about their citizens.
The end of next year will be a presidential election.
I hope that first-of-all truly people and competent president will elected.
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