Please check my sentences gramatically (7.20)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We went camping by using my car.
It happend a problem on the highway.
Suddenly my car was out of order.
I checked my car and I got the reason.
One of tires was flat.
Even though I didn't know how to fix my car, one of my friends who were in our group was a perfect handy man.
After this incident, I never forget to check up my car before I go to somewhere.
We fish along the river and have fun in the swimming pool.
Although kids are careful about everything, they are careless.
So guardians must always keep an eye on kids.
One day, she blacked out and falled down on the street because of awful cramps.
She has to get chances to intruct many people as a freelancer instructor.
She doesn't have full time job.
If she has a course to intruct, she can do it.
But, If she doesn't have a course to intruct, she have to search other course.
Almost jobs in korea are not qualified such as low pay, long working time.
Only a few people use their english while they work.
It happend a problem on the highway.
Suddenly my car was out of order.
I checked my car and I got the reason.
One of tires was flat.
Even though I didn't know how to fix my car, one of my friends who were in our group was a perfect handy man.
After this incident, I never forget to check up my car before I go to somewhere.
We fish along the river and have fun in the swimming pool.
Although kids are careful about everything, they are careless.
So guardians must always keep an eye on kids.
One day, she blacked out and falled down on the street because of awful cramps.
She has to get chances to intruct many people as a freelancer instructor.
She doesn't have full time job.
If she has a course to intruct, she can do it.
But, If she doesn't have a course to intruct, she have to search other course.
Almost jobs in korea are not qualified such as low pay, long working time.
Only a few people use their english while they work.
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