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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 07. 21 조회 13143

help, please

작성자: 1100632765 담당 튜터: Hunter1
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There are always dillema to keep the equilibrium between the right to privacy and the freedom of information.
If I want some infornation and search for internet and reply the question, I am very happy with it but these cases, I may be infringe other privacy.
A few years ago, the mistaken repotrs about me were newspapers and they were also on the internet.
People who had read the report might thought as if I am a criminal.
I am distressed about that.
Many people are damaged mistaken reports and information although they correct them with great efforts, the recoverance of their damages is difficult and people weren’t interested in the results
튜터 교정 답변

Great job, Rose!!

There are always dillemas to keep the equilibrium between the right to privacy and the freedom of information.
If I want some information and search the internet, I am very happy with the results, but in some cases, it may be infringing on other's privacy.
A few years ago, mistaken reports about me were in newspapers and on the internet.
People who read the reports might have thought I was a criminal.
I was distressed about that.
Many people are damaged by mistaken reports and information. Although they correct them with great efforts, recovering from their damage is difficult, and people aren't interested in the results.

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