My House

The type of my house is a regualr apartment. There are 14 floors in the apartment and my house is located in 7th floor. I live in my house with my family. There are TV deck and audio deck in the livining room. There are a large bed and big closet in the sleeping room.

     1. There are 14 floors in the apartment and my house is located in 7th floor.

    --> There are 14 floors in the apartment and my house is located on the 7th floor.

    2. There are a large bed and big closet in the sleeping room.

    --> There is a large bed and a big closet in the sleeping room.

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