help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The rate of economy growth is slow down and there are hard for people to get jobs.
Big companies are unwiling to hire new recruiters because of economic uncertainity.
Young people and early retiree try to study to be civil servants or open new restaurants.
Gumi and Pohang city in Gyeongbuk were major companies but they moved another cities and many workies here were out of job.
Pohang city was famous for steel industry but that is competitive other countries like China and business profit doesn’t work.
These cities will be hard to survive if the dovernment doesn’t set up the special measures.
The world economy is connected country-to-country and is affected each other.
I wish every countryon earth lives happily and well
Big companies are unwiling to hire new recruiters because of economic uncertainity.
Young people and early retiree try to study to be civil servants or open new restaurants.
Gumi and Pohang city in Gyeongbuk were major companies but they moved another cities and many workies here were out of job.
Pohang city was famous for steel industry but that is competitive other countries like China and business profit doesn’t work.
These cities will be hard to survive if the dovernment doesn’t set up the special measures.
The world economy is connected country-to-country and is affected each other.
I wish every countryon earth lives happily and well
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