today's script
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I live in a studio apartment for five years. Because I left hometown to work.
My house is 14 floors. and has a variety of furniture.
My house has a bed, computer, TV, washing machine, refrigerator and so on.
Even though my house is small, it is very modern and well-organized.
and There are many cultural facilities around the house
For instance, the supermarkets, movie theaters and more.
In my free time at home, I like to watch tv all day long. because Iam very comfortable while watching TV.
Plus, watching tv makes me relaxed alot because I don't need to think any thing.
My house is 14 floors. and has a variety of furniture.
My house has a bed, computer, TV, washing machine, refrigerator and so on.
Even though my house is small, it is very modern and well-organized.
and There are many cultural facilities around the house
For instance, the supermarkets, movie theaters and more.
In my free time at home, I like to watch tv all day long. because Iam very comfortable while watching TV.
Plus, watching tv makes me relaxed alot because I don't need to think any thing.
튜터 교정 답변
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