help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It’s not easy for me to tell you who my favorite singer is.
I like many singers, so I can’t pick just one person up.
Nowadays, idol singers are mainstreaming in Korea.
They have trained very hard at least for seven to eight years.
When they are debut, they are good at singing and dancing.
I don’t know that they sing sings lyric but I know only their melody’s feelings.
I went to see singers’ concert several times.
The stars seemed to prepare the performance so much and audience also enjoyed althogether.
I like to see the performance, but the ticket prices are expensive.
I like many singers, so I can’t pick just one person up.
Nowadays, idol singers are mainstreaming in Korea.
They have trained very hard at least for seven to eight years.
When they are debut, they are good at singing and dancing.
I don’t know that they sing sings lyric but I know only their melody’s feelings.
I went to see singers’ concert several times.
The stars seemed to prepare the performance so much and audience also enjoyed althogether.
I like to see the performance, but the ticket prices are expensive.
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