Describe Outside of the office building
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The office building I work at is one of the highest buildings around here. So I have a fair view outside my office window.
In front of the office building, there is an access way in the center from the gate to the main Entrance of the building.
There is a beautiful garden on the left, which has a pond, a bridge over it, a cottage, big zelkova trees.
There are two buildings on the right. One is for sales and purchase team and another one is for experiments. There is a basketball court between the two buildings. The young colleagues play the basketball at lunch time.
Around my company site it looks like there is no factory at first glance but there are a lot of factories in the buildings which resemble apartments.
I can see the low mountains in the distance. There are a lot of apartments at the foot of the mountains.
Overall, the view from my office building is a typical view of a small city in the suburb of the Seoul in Korea.
In front of the office building, there is an access way in the center from the gate to the main Entrance of the building.
There is a beautiful garden on the left, which has a pond, a bridge over it, a cottage, big zelkova trees.
There are two buildings on the right. One is for sales and purchase team and another one is for experiments. There is a basketball court between the two buildings. The young colleagues play the basketball at lunch time.
Around my company site it looks like there is no factory at first glance but there are a lot of factories in the buildings which resemble apartments.
I can see the low mountains in the distance. There are a lot of apartments at the foot of the mountains.
Overall, the view from my office building is a typical view of a small city in the suburb of the Seoul in Korea.
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