Playing a game
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As a matter of fact, I seldom play with smartphone. Instead, I prefer playing some of classical games like Nintendo or Xbox, which are not as popular at this moment as in the past. The reason has something to do with the fact that I can play them with my kids. In other words, we can share happy time together playing those kinds of games at home, and I do believe that this kind of activity would enhance the relationship among family members. Another thing that you need to know is the fact that I also enjoy PC games such as Starcraft, and that's because you can have literally a lot of options to choose when it comes to the strategies or tactics, so to say it provides more tension and makes you really into it. Well, all in all, playing a game is always enjoyable.
튜터 교정 답변
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