help, please
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I don’t like to go p and down the stairs by walking.
If the escalator is nearby, I always use it.
I spend in sedentory work most of my office time.
I usually work in computing, meeting, and discussing.
I sometimes feel my body unusually if I sit down a desk in three to four hours.
My leg s are weaken and shoulders feel stiff.
These days, I try to stand up at least once an hour and walk around.
When I get to and from work, I walk from home to office and it takes about twenty to thirty minutes and it helps me.
If the escalator is nearby, I always use it.
I spend in sedentory work most of my office time.
I usually work in computing, meeting, and discussing.
I sometimes feel my body unusually if I sit down a desk in three to four hours.
My leg s are weaken and shoulders feel stiff.
These days, I try to stand up at least once an hour and walk around.
When I get to and from work, I walk from home to office and it takes about twenty to thirty minutes and it helps me.
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