help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
While I am reading and studying Amercian newspapers, I think I am a conservative.
The world is changing and my kids thoughts are different from me, but I am not used to these situation.
Till now, I am trying tp think commomsensibly.
Frankly, some men were as women but these happen performance life gag and drama and it's not reality.
A few years ago, a famous talent dared to come out and people was surprised at the news and it was socially controversial. After that he didn’t show up on the air but he resumes broadcasting activities now.
People including me don’t care for it.
To accept other social convention and myth, people need a long time.
The world is changing and my kids thoughts are different from me, but I am not used to these situation.
Till now, I am trying tp think commomsensibly.
Frankly, some men were as women but these happen performance life gag and drama and it's not reality.
A few years ago, a famous talent dared to come out and people was surprised at the news and it was socially controversial. After that he didn’t show up on the air but he resumes broadcasting activities now.
People including me don’t care for it.
To accept other social convention and myth, people need a long time.
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