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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 07. 29 조회 14864

Crab Fisheries

작성자: minebuu 담당 튜터: Richard1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I just googled the crab fishing.
We call the people who is catching the crabs as of crabber.
To catch the crab, we need crab line which is made from heavy string such as fishing line, bait, weight and chicken.
The weight should be tied the bait with chicken.
After then, we should the cast the line and wait until crabs grab the bail.
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I just googled the crab fishing.
We call the people who is catching the catch crabs as of crabbers.
To catch the crab, we need crab line which is made from heavy string such as fishing line, bait, weight and chicken.
The weight should be tied to the bait with chicken.
After then that, we should the cast the line and wait until crabs grab the bail.

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