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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 08. 04 조회 14755

Summer Weather

작성자: pkpm0807 담당 튜터: Beth1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It is very hot and sticky these days. So I tend to stay in if I don' have any plans. I hope that this hot summer will be over soon!

Stay cool!
튜터 교정 답변

It is very hot and sticky these days. So I tend to stay in if I don't have any plans. I hope that this hot summer will be over soon!

Stay cool!

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The weather in my area has been very hot as well. Some days it can be very uncomfortable so I stay inside my apartment. Other days there is a nice breeze so I will go to the beach or to the pool. I am ready for this hot weather to end as well. 

Teacher Beth

 

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