I like a movie
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My favorite movie genre is romance. One of the most memorable movie is ‘TITANIC”.
It was released in late 1990’s.
It’s about a love story. The main stars were Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.
The director was James Cameron.
My favorite actor is Kate Winslet. As you know, I love romance movies so much. She starred in titanic, the dress maker etc. I like her because she has amazing acting skills and she has a classical beauty. Especially titanic is the most memorable movie I've ever seen. It a had a sad ending. You should definitely watch it.
Between 10 years ago and now, cinema system have changed in many things.
10 years ago, for watching a movie, we should go to a cinema 2-3 hours ago for buying a ticket and then should wait until start time. Sometimes while waiting a movie, I watched another movie.
Recently I reserve tickets on the smartphone. So I don’t need to wait to watch a movie.
It is very convenient to buy on the smartphone.
It was released in late 1990’s.
It’s about a love story. The main stars were Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.
The director was James Cameron.
My favorite actor is Kate Winslet. As you know, I love romance movies so much. She starred in titanic, the dress maker etc. I like her because she has amazing acting skills and she has a classical beauty. Especially titanic is the most memorable movie I've ever seen. It a had a sad ending. You should definitely watch it.
Between 10 years ago and now, cinema system have changed in many things.
10 years ago, for watching a movie, we should go to a cinema 2-3 hours ago for buying a ticket and then should wait until start time. Sometimes while waiting a movie, I watched another movie.
Recently I reserve tickets on the smartphone. So I don’t need to wait to watch a movie.
It is very convenient to buy on the smartphone.
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