Bus Just intrude my lane.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
i'm trying to mimic the car accident that happened yesterday.
My bus was heading to the 2nd lane, suddenly the big truck try to intrude my lane, so my
bus suddenly stopped. and the bus following my bus hit the back side of my bus, so some
people got back and neck injuries.
My bus was heading to the 2nd lane, suddenly the big truck try to intrude my lane, so my
bus suddenly stopped. and the bus following my bus hit the back side of my bus, so some
people got back and neck injuries.
튜터 교정 답변
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