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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 08. 27 조회 13756

Egalitarian

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In my opinion, an ideal society is an egalitarian society. However, it is hard for us to follow ideal thoughts.
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Great use of the word of the day! I have no corrections for you! Keep up the hard work!

 

In my opinion, an ideal society is an egalitarian society. However, it is hard for us to follow ideal thoughts.

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