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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 09. 03 조회 13027

Sudden Autumn

작성자: pkpm0807 담당 튜터: Beth1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
These days it has suddenly gotten cold.

Most of the people, including me, didn't expect this sudden cold becuase the hot weather had lasted for a long time.

Although I am not familar with the sudden autumn right now, I try to enjoy this good and suitable weather to hang out.
튜터 교정 답변

These days it has suddenly gotten cold.

Most people, including me, didn't expect this sudden change because the hot weather had lasted for a long time. 

Although, I am not used to Autumn yet I will try to enjoy this good and suitable weather. 

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