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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 09. 03 조회 12872

Business email

작성자: pkpm0807 담당 튜터: Beth1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear James,

Thank you for your support and cooperation.

I am writing this email to inform you that we received the fee that you paid last July. We couldn't check because there were some errors in our internal system.

We apologize for any inconvenience we may have caused you.

Also, if possible, could you please kindly provide us supporting documents about withholding tax (10%, USD 3,000)? It is necessary for us to reflect the withholding tax in our accounting system.

Thank you.

Sincerely,
Cho
튜터 교정 답변

Dear James,

Thank you for your support and cooperation.

I am writing this email to inform you that we received the fee that you paid last July. We couldn't check before because there were some errors in our internal system.

We apologize for any inconvenience we may have caused you.

Also, if possible, could you please kindly(this is not incorrect but since you have already said "please" you don't have to say "kindly" as well) provide us with the supporting documents for withholding tax (10%, USD 3,000)? It is necessary for us to reflect the withholding tax in our accounting system.

Thank you.

Sincerely,
Cho

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