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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 09. 06 조회 14512

Drop by

작성자: pkpm0807 담당 튜터: Beth1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Today one of my friends will open a bbq restaurant in Suwon.

So I will drop by his restuarant with some of my friends this Saturday to celebrate the opening.
튜터 교정 답변

Today, one of my friends will open a bbq restaurant in Suwon.

So I will drop by his restaurant with some of my friends, this Saturday, to celebrate the opening.

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The grammar in these sentences looks good. 

The only corrections I made was to add a few commas. I added the commas because it separates needed information from unneeded information. 

If you remove "today" and "this Saturday" from the sentences they would still be complete.

Ex: One of my friends will open a bbq restaurant in Suwon. 

      So I will drop by his restaurant with some of my friends to celebrate the opening. 

Teacher Beth

 

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