Korea weather traits
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Korea has four disdinct seasons.
Spring is a lovely season. It's warm and pleasant with occasinal showers.
Unfortunately, a lot of the yellow dust blows in from China at that time.
In spring, People love to see the cheery blossoms and there are some very famous place
to do this.
Summer is hot and humid as this is monsoon season. I think the weather is too hot at this time of the year.
In summer, children like to go swimming in the sea or go to a water park such as Caribbean Bay.
Sometimes Korean like to eat Giseng chicken on hot summer days!
Fall is wonderful. There are cool breeze and it stops rainnig.
In fall, it's great time for hiking because the leaves chang color on the mountainside.
Winter is vet dry. We have to use humidifiers during this season. Outside it is often below freezing and occasinally there is snow.
Winter is ski season and the moutains are covered with snow.
Spring is a lovely season. It's warm and pleasant with occasinal showers.
Unfortunately, a lot of the yellow dust blows in from China at that time.
In spring, People love to see the cheery blossoms and there are some very famous place
to do this.
Summer is hot and humid as this is monsoon season. I think the weather is too hot at this time of the year.
In summer, children like to go swimming in the sea or go to a water park such as Caribbean Bay.
Sometimes Korean like to eat Giseng chicken on hot summer days!
Fall is wonderful. There are cool breeze and it stops rainnig.
In fall, it's great time for hiking because the leaves chang color on the mountainside.
Winter is vet dry. We have to use humidifiers during this season. Outside it is often below freezing and occasinally there is snow.
Winter is ski season and the moutains are covered with snow.
튜터 교정 답변
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