Problems of the Electronic Cars
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I heard that Tesla are attracting the consumers' attention in USA car market. USA government subsidizes the electronic cars, so, their price competitiveness are improved.
However, electronic cars are not appealing the consumers in Korean market. First, electronic cars are more expensive than gasoline cars. In addition, their performances are lower and they are inconvenient. It takes so much time to recharge batteries and it is very difficult to find recharging houses.
For electronic cars to be popular, the technology in battery areas should be improved innovatively and government should support the industry.
However, electronic cars are not appealing the consumers in Korean market. First, electronic cars are more expensive than gasoline cars. In addition, their performances are lower and they are inconvenient. It takes so much time to recharge batteries and it is very difficult to find recharging houses.
For electronic cars to be popular, the technology in battery areas should be improved innovatively and government should support the industry.
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