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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 09. 14 조회 13993

Homework (1)

작성자: pkpm0807 담당 튜터: Beth1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, Beth.

Thank you for your good teaching as always.

As you know well, tomorrow is Chuseok in Korea. So I am going to go back home in Seoul soon.

I wrote some sentences by using expressions that I learned recently. When you have some free time later, please review them.

FYI, I took all the sessions of this week in advance because of the Chuseok holiday.

See you next Monday!

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1. Try on shoes for size.
<Dialogue>
Cho : Hi, James. I bought shoes for your birthday. Try on the shoes for size. I really hope that they will be suitable for you.
James Oh, Cho! Thank you very much. I really like the brand and style of the shoes. And, they are very suitable for me. Does it look good on me?
튜터 교정 답변

1. Try on shoes for size.

Cho : Hi, James. I bought you shoes for your birthday. Try on the shoes for size. I really hope that they will be suitable for you. 
James Oh, Cho! Thank you very much. I really like the brand and style of the shoes. And, they are very suitable for me. Does it look good on me?

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These sentences look good. I only made one correction. I added the word "you." I added the word "you" because without that word it sounds like Cho was saying he bought shoes for himself instead of as a present for James. 

I hope you have a wonderful holiday.

Teacher Beth

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