My Neighborhood
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I have lived in SeongNam si, Bundang Gu since 2001.
My vilage name is MokRyun which means "magnolia" flower.
My neighborhood is usually quiet and calm because it is somewhat distant from downtown area.
My favorite site is Maeng-san mountain and my family often go to climb this mountain from spring to autumn season.
There is Sang-top elementry scholl which is my second daughter's school near my house. It is the best place for biking and playing with my kids. I love my neighborhood because it makes me relaxed and calm when I am staying at home.
My vilage name is MokRyun which means "magnolia" flower.
My neighborhood is usually quiet and calm because it is somewhat distant from downtown area.
My favorite site is Maeng-san mountain and my family often go to climb this mountain from spring to autumn season.
There is Sang-top elementry scholl which is my second daughter's school near my house. It is the best place for biking and playing with my kids. I love my neighborhood because it makes me relaxed and calm when I am staying at home.
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