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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 19 조회 15766

hi elsie

작성자: 1101786518 담당 튜터: Elsie2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi elsie
my name is joshua. Do you remember me?
I'm one of your shudent and We meet Tuesday and thursday at p.m 10:00~10.
elsie, I reget to inform you that I'm schuduled to have a important meeting on tuesday.
so, I have a request to you.
could I postpone our appointed time from tuesday to wednesday?
if you accept my request please let me know.
thank you
튜터 교정 답변

Hi elsie my name is joshua.

> Hi Elsie, my name is Joshua.

 Do you remember me?

I'm one of your shudent and We meet Tuesday and thursday at p.m 10:00~10.

> I'm one of your student and we meet every Tuesday and Thursday  at  10:00 p.m

 

elsie, I reget to inform you that I'm schuduled to have a important meeting on tuesday.

> Elsie, I regret to inform you that I'm scheduled to attend an important meeting on Tuesday.

so, I have a request to you. could I postpone our appointed time from tuesday to wednesday?

> so , I have a request for you. Could I postpone our appointed time from Tuesday to Wednesday?

 if you accept my request please let me know. thank you

> If you accept my request please let me know. Thank you

 

Joshua,

That's okay with me. However, please contact your study manager for the delay of your class.

Thank you and good  luck!

 

T. Elsie

 

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