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The status of mobilephone is very bad. so I can't teacher's voice.

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The status of mobilephone is very bad. so I can't teacher's voice.
Teacher make a call again, but I can't your voice. maybe status of mobile commucation is unstable.
Have a nice evening. See you tomorrow.
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The status of mobilephone is very bad. so I can't teacher's voice. Teacher make a call again, but I can't your voice. maybe status of mobile commucation is unstable. Have a nice evening. See you tomorrow.

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The status connection of mobile phone was very bad so I can't hear teacher's voice. Teacher make a call called again but still I can't hear his voice. Maybe status of mobile the connection was unstable. Have a nice evening. See you tomorrow.

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The connection of mobile phone was very bad so I can't hear teacher's voice. Teacher called again but still I can't hear his voice. Maybe the connection was unstable. Have a nice evening. See you tomorrow.

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I apologize for what happened last night. I'll call you later. Have a nice afternoon.

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