beach 1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like going to the beach in the summer.
And I usually wear swimsuit and one piece.
A few years ago, I put on my short jean and T-shirt and I felt easy to play.
But after then, I got to know how it is difficult to do the laundry.
My clothes were soked up the seawater and full of sand. So I couldn't use washing machine and it's very difficult.
After this experience, I usually put on my swimsuit and one piece.
Nowadays many people wear the rash guard. It is long and sand is not clunged. next summer, I will buy and put on it.
And I usually wear swimsuit and one piece.
A few years ago, I put on my short jean and T-shirt and I felt easy to play.
But after then, I got to know how it is difficult to do the laundry.
My clothes were soked up the seawater and full of sand. So I couldn't use washing machine and it's very difficult.
After this experience, I usually put on my swimsuit and one piece.
Nowadays many people wear the rash guard. It is long and sand is not clunged. next summer, I will buy and put on it.
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