Leisure for Sports
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Last week, I went to see a soccer game at the Sangarm WorldCup stadium with my family.
I enjoy watching soccer because it is very fun and exciting.
Before the game, I bought some popcorn and soda.
and I went to the restroom because I didn't want to miss any parts of the game.
During the first half of the game, no one scored any goals. After half-time, my team scored its first goal.
That was the best part of the game. We screamed together, and it was very exciting and thrilling.
However, one player on my team comitted a foul. The other team scored on a penalty shot.
When the game was over the score was tied.
I was very disappointed with the result so I went back home directly.
I enjoy watching soccer because it is very fun and exciting.
Before the game, I bought some popcorn and soda.
and I went to the restroom because I didn't want to miss any parts of the game.
During the first half of the game, no one scored any goals. After half-time, my team scored its first goal.
That was the best part of the game. We screamed together, and it was very exciting and thrilling.
However, one player on my team comitted a foul. The other team scored on a penalty shot.
When the game was over the score was tied.
I was very disappointed with the result so I went back home directly.
튜터 교정 답변
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