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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 11. 07 조회 14814

Injection

작성자: HCC200300838 담당 튜터: Ronna2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I stayed home all day long during weekend. I had back ache. I visited at hospital. I got a Injection. At last time, I got a acupuncture. I want to be good quickly. I should have got appropriate treatment as painful areas.
튜터 교정 답변

I stayed home all day long during weekend. I had back ache. I visited at hospital. I got a Injection. At last time, I got a acupuncture. I want to be good quickly. I should have got appropriate treatment as painful areas.

 

--I visited the hospital.

-- The last time,

I want to be cured fast/ I want to get well

I should have get proper treatment in painful areas

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