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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 11. 09 조회 13971

Farewall

작성자: HCC200300838 담당 튜터: Ronna2
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학생 제출 원문
We had a company get together tonight.
That was farewall party for female college. She have been working for two years. She didn't have a chance to be regular employee. She had a farewell speech and cried. I felt sorry.
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We had a company get together tonight.
That was farewall party for female college. She have been working for two years. She didn't have a chance to be regular employee. She had a farewell speech and cried. I felt sorry.

 

FAREWELL

a farewell party for our female colleague.

she has been working in our company for two years

 

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