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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 20 조회 12005

Intrument

작성자: 119906 담당 튜터: Cris
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Well, I suppose I'd have to talk about the musical instrument that I play these days. What I want to discuss here is guitar, which I'm really into playing. I still practice it at least twice a week to maintain my skills. Now, regarding the next aspect of learning it, well, you need to know that I taught myself. As far as I can remember, I was a junior high school student when I first got to a kind of will to play that instrument, and I managed to rent one from one of my friends. I just followed a guide book for beginners and after for a while, I mean for about several months, I could become play it at basic levels. As a matter of fact, I attribute my interest on guitar to my cousin who used to play his guitar whenever I visit him. To be more specific, the moment that I watched him playing a famous song at that time piqued my first interest in it.
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Well, I suppose I'd have to talk about the musical instrument that I play these days. What I want to discuss here is guitar,

which I'm really into playing. I still practice it at least twice a week to maintain my skills. Now, regarding the next aspect of

learning it, well, you need to know that I taught myself. As far as I can remember, I was in junior high school student when

I first got to a kind of will to play that instrument, and I managed to rent one from one of my friends. I just followed a guide

book for beginners and after for a while, I mean for about several months, I could play it at basic levels. As a matter of fact,

I attribute my interest on guitar to my cousin who used to play his guitar whenever I visit him. To be more specific, the

moment that I watched him playing a famous song at that time piqued my first interest in it.

 

Hi Sean,

I am very happy to say that the composition that you have sent to me is almost perfect with just minor flaws on it. You could see the corrections that I put that is in red letters. Thank you for sharing me your thoughts about your interest in guitar playing and I hope to hear more from you so I can get to know you better. Maybe on e of these days, in our future classes I can hear you play your guitar. :) Have a great day!

 

 

 

Teacher Cris,

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