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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 12. 01 조회 13946

Hi~

작성자: credu_sds_25701 담당 튜터: Wynston1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi~
I'm happy to meet you~
and hope to have a great time with you and learn how to speak english a lot.
I have kept this phone english class for last 4-5 years.
but I just wanted to keep the level of my english and enjoy to talk.
and now I found I need to study to achive my goals what I said...
I want to improve and enjoy the English skills while you are helping me.
and I want to say I'm sorry that I will sometims be absent from this class..
it's around 8:50 AM in Korean time, but there are sometims urgent meeting at my work.
in this case, I could't get your call, I will be really appreciate for your understanding when i could'nt respose for your call.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi~
I'm happy to meet you~
and hope to have a great time with you and learn how to speak english a lot.
I have kept this phone english class for last 4-5 years.
but I just wanted to keep the level of my english and enjoy to talk.
and now I found I need to study to achive my goals what I said...
I want to improve and enjoy the English skills while you are helping me.
and I want to say I'm sorry that I will sometims be absent from this class..
it's around 8:50 AM in Korean time, but there are sometims urgent meeting at my work.
in this case, I could't get your call, I will be really appreciate for your understanding when i could'nt respose for your call.

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