safety hazards
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I told my children about the safety hazards of crossing the road.
You said that "the safety hazards of crossing the road" is not proper.
So, I thought about fixing the sentence.
And I suggest two sentences.
1) I told my children about the safety hazards for crossing the road.
2) I told my children about the safety hazards happening during crossing the road.
See you.
You said that "the safety hazards of crossing the road" is not proper.
So, I thought about fixing the sentence.
And I suggest two sentences.
1) I told my children about the safety hazards for crossing the road.
2) I told my children about the safety hazards happening during crossing the road.
See you.
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