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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 22 조회 12206

hi elsie

작성자: 1101786518 담당 튜터: Elsie2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
sorry about my absence on last tuesday
I saw your advise too late, so I could'nt contact a study manager.
due to absence, l'm on serious situation
if I could not complete this class, I will have to pay out tuition myself
but I complete it, my company will pay my tuition.
therefore, I should not be abcent.
please assist me
thank you for your assistance
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sorry about my absence on last tuesday.

< Sorry about my absence last Tuesday.

I saw your advise too late, so I could'nt contact a study manager

> I saw your advise too late, so I didn'r contact my study manager.

due to absence, l'm on serious situation if I could not complete this class,

> Due to absence, I'm on a serious situation if I couldn't complete this class.

I will have to pay out tuition myself but I complete it,

> I will have to pay my tuition fee by  myself  if  I didn't  complete it. However, I made it.

> My company will pay my tuition fee.

therefore, I should not be abcent. please assist me thank you for your assistance

> Therefore, I should not be absent anymore, please assist me . Thank you.

 

Hi!  That's a good decision.  You can make it.

T. Elsie

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