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작성자: HTPC120174 담당 튜터: Patricia2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'm sorry.
I've been familiar to study at 10 o'clock than 9 o'clock.
So I forgot to change my schedule.
During you call me, I was in the bus.
Still I'm in the bus now.
Maybe I'll take the bus more than 30minutes.

Anyway recently my company forced to me to use my annual leaves more than 10 days a year from last year March to this year March.
But I just spent 7 days, so I need to use my annual leaves more than 3days.

I spend my annual leaves 5days from 20th to 26th in january. Luna New year's day will come. So I can rest during 11days. My husband can't use annual leaves. So I'll rest alone. But I already have many plans. I'll go to hair shop and massage shop. Many plans make me happy.

Next week I'll promise to catch your call.
Have a nice day and weekend.
Bye~
튜터 교정 답변

I'm sorry.
I've been familiar to study at 10 o'clock than 9 o'clock.
So I forgot to change my schedule.
During you call me, I was in the bus.
Still I'm in the bus now.
Maybe I'll take the bus more than 30minutes.

Anyway recently my company forced to me to use my annual leaves more than 10 days a year from last year March to this year March.
But I just spent 7 days, so I need to use my annual leaves more than 3days.

I spend my annual leaves 5days from 20th to 26th in january. Luna New year's day will come. So I can rest during 11days. My husband can't use annual leaves. So I'll rest alone. But I already have many plans. I'll go to hair shop and massage shop. Many plans make me happy.

Next week I'll promise to catch your call.
Have a nice day and weekend.
Bye~

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I understand completely.  I am sorry your husband can not joing you but I am glad you get a chance to rest.  When we stay at home on vacation in the US - we call it a staycation!  I have often had more fun having a staycation over going away on vacation!  I hope you have a wonderful weekend!  I look forward to talking to you next week!  

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