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Movie - The Attorney

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The Attorney, 변호인(byun-ho-in)
It was a true story of the former president of Korea, Roh Moo Hyun.
The movie focuses on his career as a laywer.

Here is a link for him - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roh_Moo-hyun

It's quite difficult to explain political topic :)
He always tried to stand for the poor and fought for protecting democracy.
And he was a man who was proud of his nation and the people of Korea.
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The Attorney, 변호인(byun-ho-in) It was a true story of the former president of Korea, Roh Moo Hyun. The movie focuses on his career as a laywer. Here is a link for him - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roh_Moo-hyun It's quite difficult to explain political topic :) He always tried to stand for the poor and fought for protecting democracy. And he was a man who was proud of his nation and the people of Korea.

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COMMENTS:

Hi Dainiel,

Thank you for your explanation. Your writing for today was great. Your sentences was perfectly constructed so congratuations for that.

Anyway I will visit the site and I will try to watch the movie as well. Thank you so much! have a happy weekends!~^^

 

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