Traveling Internationally
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Well, the first time for me to travel a foreign country was when I was university student. To be more exact, it must have been in the winter of 1997. At that time, I had prepared to travel Europe. However, because of the sudden recession of this country, it was not affordable for me to go over there. Instead, the only country that I could choose was India. Moreover, the friend with whom I had been supposed to travel became also unavailable for some reasons. As a result, I went over to India by myself. I spent about 45 days there, meeting a lot of local people as well as travelers from all across the world, enjoying ancient arts and their exotic cultures including their special religion. Even those it was way tough to use night transportation as well as the cheapest accommodations as far as I could find, I really miss those days. Now, I don't believe I would be able to get into that kind of situation because I'm a little old, however I would like to remember it forever.
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