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공개 첨삭 완료 2017. 04. 07 조회 14174

When I express my sympathy

작성자: darakwon_0520jjy 담당 튜터: Simon2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Due to the earthquake in your county last Tuesday, no one got hurt and there was no major damage,

and then is it ok if I can say like this?

" It's such a relief there wasn't a lot of damage in your hometown."
튜터 교정 답변

Due to the earthquake in your county last Tuesday, no one got hurt and there was no major damage,

and then is it ok if I can say like this?

" It's such a relief there wasn't a lot of damage in your hometown."

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CORRECTION:

"It's such relief that there is no any damages in your hometown."

 

Hi Sophie!

I appreciate your sypathy and concern. Let's hope and pray that this won't happen anymore.

 

Teacher Simon

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