guppies
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I bought two fishes whose name is guppy yesterday. I already had taken guppies a few years ago.
However it was not easy to take care of them.
Yesterday, my daughters really wanted to buy them. So they got them with their own money.
Now, I’m worry about that I treat them myself such as change water and clean the cage of fish.
I bought some stuffs online yesterday such as new cage, feeds for snails, and so on.
I think that my daughters make my house small zoo park.
However it was not easy to take care of them.
Yesterday, my daughters really wanted to buy them. So they got them with their own money.
Now, I’m worry about that I treat them myself such as change water and clean the cage of fish.
I bought some stuffs online yesterday such as new cage, feeds for snails, and so on.
I think that my daughters make my house small zoo park.
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