My holiday
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It was a holiday at Thusday this week.
I took a rest and went to mountain with my family.
We started early in the morning so that didn't meet traffic jam.
The weather was very clear and a little hot in the afternoon.
That place had a good scenery because that was located at the lakeside.
Firts, We boarded a small ferry so we could feel more pleasure.
Then, We took a walk about 2 hours along the lake.
Although i was tired that day, i had a happy time.
If i have enough time and money, i try to take a trip in foreign country with my family.
I took a rest and went to mountain with my family.
We started early in the morning so that didn't meet traffic jam.
The weather was very clear and a little hot in the afternoon.
That place had a good scenery because that was located at the lakeside.
Firts, We boarded a small ferry so we could feel more pleasure.
Then, We took a walk about 2 hours along the lake.
Although i was tired that day, i had a happy time.
If i have enough time and money, i try to take a trip in foreign country with my family.
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