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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 28 조회 13469

Walking and Jogging

작성자: 1102047904 담당 튜터: Beth
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학생 제출 원문
I like jogging because it helps me to turn my mind off and clear my head.
When I go for a jog, I always wear comfortable clothes and a pair of running shoes.
Otherwise, I have sore feet after jogging.
It's also important to wear comfortable shoes to avoid injuries.
When I go jogging during the day, I always bring a bottle of water and a towel with me.
I sweat a lot, so I need a lot of water and a towel while jogging.
Before jogging, I stretch my arms and legs as a warm-up.
I went jogging at Children's Grand Park. This morning.
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-> I like jogging because it helps me to turn my mind off  refresh my mind and clear my head.

-> When I go for a jog, I always wear comfortable clothes and a pair of running shoes.

-> Otherwise, I have sore feet after jogging. It's also important to wear comfortable shoes to avoid injuries.

-> When I go jogging during the day, I always bring a bottle of water and a towel with me.

-> I sweat a lot, so I need a  lots of water and a towel while jogging.

-> Before jogging, I stretch my arms and legs as a to warm-up.

-> I went jogging at Children's Grand Park  This this morning.

 

Hello again Peter,

Thank you for taking your supplementary class this morning and for sending me another composition.

Let me commend you for your continous improvement. You now have less corrections, unlike before. Keep it up. yes

You know what, I also like jogging and since I cannot do it early in the morning do my job, I do it on weekends instead.

It's a good way to keep a good health.

Again, great job for today. I will call tomorrow for our class. Have a great day ahead.

 

-Beth- laugh

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