Practice to write cover letter.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Based on oo’s platform, I would like to become a guide of Korean products for the global markets. I have experienced the big distribution market of a major corporation ‘Shinsegae Group.’ I have felt limited environments and markets even for remarkable competitive products. There were a number of hidden gems that I found by working as a buyer. I believe if there is a guide who lead customers to these companies, potential products for global markets pour out.
One of the significant abilities as a buyer is to identify the market flows. I was able to recognize quickly these flows due to a good relationship with our business partners. When I first became a nuts buyer, the supply system of nut products was composed of several companies. I determined to change this structure because I got some hints by meeting with our partners. I realized that nuts importing channels have been stabilized and many big companies have settled down. Thus, it was not necessary to manage operate many companies. I analyzed unit prices according to supply methods. Also, I visited partner factories in person to check all the processes. Based on my analysis, I re-established a supply chain of nut products.
Analyzing market, negotiating, and building trust with partners are key capabilities for Amazon Global Selling business. I have diverse experiences of strengthening these skills. Furthermore, working experiences as a buyer enable me to understand and communicate better with Korean retail agents. I would like to play a role as a bridge, so that many competitive products of Korea can successfully enter the global market. Thus, I believe I am the one who is qualified for this position. I thank you for your time and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
One of the significant abilities as a buyer is to identify the market flows. I was able to recognize quickly these flows due to a good relationship with our business partners. When I first became a nuts buyer, the supply system of nut products was composed of several companies. I determined to change this structure because I got some hints by meeting with our partners. I realized that nuts importing channels have been stabilized and many big companies have settled down. Thus, it was not necessary to manage operate many companies. I analyzed unit prices according to supply methods. Also, I visited partner factories in person to check all the processes. Based on my analysis, I re-established a supply chain of nut products.
Analyzing market, negotiating, and building trust with partners are key capabilities for Amazon Global Selling business. I have diverse experiences of strengthening these skills. Furthermore, working experiences as a buyer enable me to understand and communicate better with Korean retail agents. I would like to play a role as a bridge, so that many competitive products of Korea can successfully enter the global market. Thus, I believe I am the one who is qualified for this position. I thank you for your time and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
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