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I went to WORKSHP and I'm contiune Presentaion.

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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I went to workshop and I'm contiune presentaion so I don't recieve your phone. sorry^^
January is very busy monthly, because we must have make the "PLAN of 2014"

see y tonight!!
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I went to workshop and I'm contiune presentaion so I don't recieve your phone. sorry^^ January is very busy monthly, because we must have make the "PLAN of 2014" see y tonight!!

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I'm  in a workshop and having a presentation so I didn't receive/answer your call. Sorry^^.

January is a very busy month because we have to make the " Plans of 2014". /

January is a very busy month because we have to make the plans for 2014.

See you tonight!!!

( I corrected the composition based on what I think you meant.)

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