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공개 첨삭 완료 2017. 11. 14 조회 13405

Have you ever suffered from insomnia ?

작성자: ricebag 담당 튜터: Cee
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I haved suffered from insomnia since I sent Soli to sister and I was finally alone.
I frequently can't go to sleep well and then next day I used to have bad condition.
So I'm trying to work out very often but sometimes it's not work.
On this account, I also have mental breakdown.
Because of lots of my matters, it's very hard for me to have a social life.
I heared that many women who have insomnia after marriage, their insomnia went away.
So I also want to meet lover promptly because of several reasons.
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I have suffered from insomnia since I sent Soli to sister and I was finally alone.
I couldnt sleep well and then the next day, my condition i pretty bad.
So I'm trying to work out very often but sometimes it does not work.
On this account, I also have mental breakdown.
Because of my many concerns, it's very hard for me to have a social life.
I heard that many women who have insomnia after marriage become stable after sometime.
So I also want to meet a lover promptly for some reasons.

  I suffered from insomnia time and again.  Take care Jiyong.

 

Cee

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