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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 06. 02 조회 14610

Teacher Michele, I'm glad to meet you.

작성자: 71256 담당 튜터: Michelle
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear, Teacher Michele

I'm glad to meet you.
I'm started english for 3 months ago. I'm not fluent in english.
For the first time, but I'll try harder.
Please, Take care of me.

I'll change to 'The Basic English Conversation Book' instead of OPIC Text book.
See you tomorrow again.

Have a nice day.
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CORRECTIONS:

Dear, Teacher Michele

► Dear, Teacher Michele Michelle,

I'm glad to meet you. = √

I'm started english for 3 months ago.

► I'm I started to study eEnglish for 3 months ago.

I'm not fluent in english. For the first time, but I'll try harder.

►I'm not fluent in eEnglish For the  at first time, but I'll try harder.

Please, Take care of me. I'll change to 'The Basic English Conversation Book' instead of OPIC Text book.

► Please, Take care of me. I'll change my book to 'The Basic English Conversation Book' instead of  an OPIC Text book.

See you tomorrow again. Have a nice day. = √

 

REPLY:

Howdy! Justin,

I'm so happy that you become my student. I know that you're trying your best to learn how to become a fluent English speaker, don't worry I'll do my best to help you. It's not east at first but as long as you have the determination and you are motivated you will improve. I know that you have the potential just keep on practicing and don't be shy to express what's on your mind. See you next class! wink

 

--Teacher Michelle",)

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