I have high standards.
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학생 제출 원문
It’s raining now, and according to the weather forecast it will be extremely cold this week.
I already have some winter jackets but I need warmer one than I had.
I really want to buy a beautiful, fancy and reasonable duck down coat this winter.
I have been searched the coat on the internet and gone window shopping in the department store, but now I realized that I don't want to have the coat with a racoon or fox fur hood but there are almost that kinds of coat in Korea these days.
I have too high standards for my financial condition to buy thing so it’s not easy for me to go shopping.
I already have some winter jackets but I need warmer one than I had.
I really want to buy a beautiful, fancy and reasonable duck down coat this winter.
I have been searched the coat on the internet and gone window shopping in the department store, but now I realized that I don't want to have the coat with a racoon or fox fur hood but there are almost that kinds of coat in Korea these days.
I have too high standards for my financial condition to buy thing so it’s not easy for me to go shopping.
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