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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 06. 02 조회 14147

My favorite actor/actress

작성자: 1101160011 담당 튜터: Mitch2
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My favorite actress is Scarlett Johansson.
She is 30 years old .
she starred in the movie the Avengers and Iros Man.
She is very pretty. this is one of the reasons why I love you.
so I like her because she is good at actress and has such a sweet voice.
Moveover, she can play diverse character types.
One day, I want to meet her in person and take a photo together.
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[CORRECTION]

My favorite actress is Scarlett Johansson. She is 30 years old. She starred in the movie the Avengers and Iron Man. She is very pretty. This is one of the reasons why I love her. So, I like her because she is good at acting and has such a sweet voice. Moveover, she can play diverse characters. One day, I want to meet her in person and take a photo together.

[COMMENT]

Hello, Aaron! It's nice to know that your favorite Hollywood actress is Scarlett Johansson. She is one of the most beautiful and sexiest actresses in Hollywood. I like her "The Avengers" movie. I agree that she is a good actress. I hope you can meet her in person and take a photo together. Just be careful with the correct spelling of the word. Keep it up!

Have a nice day,

Teacher Mitch ^_^

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