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공개 첨삭 완료 2018. 02. 21 조회 13140

I think it's time to act not to much thinking. :]

작성자: ricebag 담당 튜터: Cee
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I applied for a company at work today.It's very spine-tingling and now I think it's a good way to prepare for my better future in between time working rather than being tormented without any action. Of course, I'm working hard and I'll try to make careful preparations to my future career.
I have much idea of practicing speaking English by reading a book about learning of En.
In the book, author say that we have to memorize one English pattern book perfectly at least.
I stopped taking language institute from Jany now that it's too cold and I want to memorize lots of appropriate sentences.
튜터 교정 답변

I applied for a job today.  It was very spine-tingling but I think it's a good way to prepare for my better future rather than being tormented without any action. Of course, I'm working hard and I'm preparing my future career carefully.
I have a lot of chances to practice my speaking ability by reading English books.
In the book,  the author say that we have to memorize one English pattern book perfectly at least.
I stopped taking language institute from Jany now that it's too cold.  I want to memorize lots of appropriate sentences.

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