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공개 첨삭 완료 2018. 04. 05 조회 13383

2018.4.4. dairy

작성자: tsu201601106 담당 튜터: NancyP2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
on coming back to home, after school, i want to eat pizza. so i request this to my mom. and i have a nap, after a few times, i wake up. and my mom prepare our dinner. but, there isn't the pizza that i want to eat.... so i very dissapointed.
so, i ask mom why didn't she buy it, and my mom answered, ' i think you wake by next morning'!!!
so, unwillingly, i ater korean cuisine......
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On coming back home after school, I wanted to eat pizza. So, I requested this to my mom and I went to take a nap. After some time, I woke up. My mom had prepared our dinner but, there wasn't the pizza that I had wanted to eat.... so, I was very disappointed!
So, I asked my mom why she hadn't bought it and my mom answered, "I thought you wouldn't wake-up until tomorrow morning!!!"
So, unwillingly, I ate Korean cuisine......

Thanks for sending this to me, Gyeongmin!  I really enjoyed reading it and I hope that the corrections help!!  Hope to talk to you again tomorrow night!!! ~ Nancy

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