my weenkend
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학생 제출 원문
this is first weekend in april.and i am really happy because i have a break
so, i slept almost 10 times and eat very much;; chicken, pizza, pasta and so on
and i dont do any exercise and playing work.
so i get more weight..... it is very sad
but!!! i solved my stress and tiring.. it is really good situation
after tomorrow, i will do study really hard and i will do exercise hardly..
i want to have more time to enhance my alone activity!!!!
and you?? how about your weekend?
so, i slept almost 10 times and eat very much;; chicken, pizza, pasta and so on
and i dont do any exercise and playing work.
so i get more weight..... it is very sad
but!!! i solved my stress and tiring.. it is really good situation
after tomorrow, i will do study really hard and i will do exercise hardly..
i want to have more time to enhance my alone activity!!!!
and you?? how about your weekend?
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