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공개 첨삭 완료 2018. 04. 12 조회 13432

Today, it is very hard day

작성자: tsu201601106 담당 튜터: NancyP2
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Today, i had a lot of schedule.
first, i submitted the nursing sience report
second, i had a presentation ahead of many people... so it was very scary and had butterflies in my stomach
third, i had a lot of class in school....

so, today is very very busy.. but i think it is course that i can do level up for my skill and my knowledge...
In future, i want to be good person and a woman of ability in my major.
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Today, I had a lot ON MY schedule.
First, I submitted A nursing science report.
Second, I had a presentation IN FRONT of many people... so, it was very scary and I had butterflies in my stomach!!
Third, I had a lot of classES DURING school....

So, today WAS A very, very busy DAY but, I think it is A course that I WILL BE ABLE TO SHOW THEM my skillS and my knowledge...
In THE future, I want to be A good person and a woman of ability, ESPECIALLY in my major! {I think you already are this person, Mina!}

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